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Wander「彷徨う~」   

作成日時 2019-11-08
コメント日時 2019-11-08

wander alone, drink a little when I look up to the sky with sorrow the sun seems to go, silent as before the fishing boats sing a song of lonely soul by the running river stand a few people In my eyes the moonlight slowly flows to my home I have deep affections for with the words I always wanna say to you I wander alone, I wonder where to go can not stop the tears of missing you As to you, youth days come and later go I grow up to find you getting older and older I feel cold, I fear the wind and snow A call from you leaves me something warm since I was born, you’ve given me everything you can give however, you never never let me know by the running river stand a few people In my eyes the moonlight slowly flows to my home I have deep affections for with the words I always wanna say to you I wander alone, I wonder where to go can not stop the tears of missing you As to you, youth days come and later go I grow up to find you getting older and older I feel cold, I fear the wind and snow A call from you leaves me something warm since I was born, you’ve given me everything you can give however, you never never let me know wander alone, drink a little when I look up to the sky with sorrow the sun seems to go, silent as before the fishing boats sing a song of lonely soul


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幻陀 (2019-11-08):

愛情と、それによって強調された寂寥感を覚えました。 日本語『彷徨う〜』版も見てみたいと感じました。お恥ずかしがながら英語の微妙なニュアンスなどは分からないので、日本語の方が叙情性が高まる気がします。 以上、拙いコメントで恐縮です。

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